This is as far as I had originally intended the story to go, but I opened it up for further development. I have some ideas about how I could continue, but I have to think about the plot some more. As always, feel free to critique the story in any way.
The Gilliwig: Chapters 3 and 4
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I like your story. It’s entertaining, well-written, and interesting. I was surprised at the ending, but I thought it was good.